Aidan Flynn

[Aidan Flynn]

Name. Aidan Morphius Flynn

Year. 6th

Age. 16


House. Slytherin

Bloodline. Pure

Wand. Ash, 11 inches, Dragon heartstring

Pet. Snowy owl named Marius

Physical Appearance. See signature

Family. Father, Armand. Mother, Andromeda (deceased), Brother Omri (twin)

Personality. Cunning and outgoing. Aidan has the girls falling at his feet. He tollerates only those who he must. He can boarder on the line of cruelity at times when dealing with a situation or someoen he does not like. He is sneeky and doesn't liek to follow the rules, but can make anyone think he is totally innocent when he must.


History. Born and raised outside of London, Aidan comes from a very wealthy family. He brother and himself are exactly the same and it is rare that they can be told apart. Thier personalities differ very little.

Aidans mother died when he was very young. Without her possitive support he had grown to take on his fathers personality. It is feared that the boys will end up deatheaters and will not be able to be disuaded from thier fathers control. Though none of been abused, the boys can exibit cruelity whenever thier father is present. Thier background and upbringing have made it very difficult to turn them from thier path, though Aidan sometimes doubts his fathers motives when bringing his sons into the deatheaters. There is talk that Aidan or Omri will be sacrificed for the common good of thier goal.


Short Term Goal. To get out gf school.

Long Term Goal. To rid himself of his fathers influence and live his own life

Best Quality. His charm. He is smart and can persuade almost anyone to do as he wishes. He has no problems in his classes but hates anythign to do with the muggle world.

Worst Quality. His fathers influence. He follows most of what his father says blindly.

Habits. Always has some girl following him. He reads old spell books. He is always looking for the next unknown spell to try on some helpless first year.

Favorite Class. DADA, Potions, Transfiguration

Least Favorite Class. Anythign to do with history or muggles.

Likes. Quidditch, girls, eating, girls, flying, girls, confusing the professors with his twin, oh and did i mention GIRLS!!!!!!!!

Dislikes. Muggles, anything to do with muggles, homework, his fathers influence

[Adren De'Marshal]

Accepted. Very good history.

[|Administrator|]

o.O Not really.

That has typos everywhere, and not to mention it doesn't exactly follow by the application form. It's missing a lot of parts that are required, so please refrain from posting or you will be getting a warning. Obviously you haven't read the rules.

Here are some pointers:
One: When making a physical appearance, don't just use a picture. o.O That shows laziness. Post five sentences of his appearance. You can describe whether his teeth are crooked, or if his nose flares out or something.

Two: Give us more description about his brother. How is their age difference and if he happens to be in the same age rank as his brother, then please explain why he isn't attending Hogwarts. Unless you were already planning on making another account and let him attend. Otherwise, if he's already out of school, or if he hasn't yet attended Hogwarts because he's way too young... Do something. Let us know.

Three: I suggest not rushing when making a profile. For one, it looks horrid. It shows that you don't have the decency to roleplay because you don't really put the effort into proofreading what you have. For another, I'd suggest using the little spell check that is already offered on this site. Or, you can use a decent word program that fixes your errors. You'd still have to read it all and make sure it made the right changes.

That's about it for now. I won't tell you word for word what needs fixed; I'm just tired of fixing everyone's mistake on past sites, so now I won't do their labor for them.

Edit: And, from now on, both the Administrator and Deputy Administrator will have to accept the application before you are able to post anywhere. Adren, not to sound rude, but please wait. xD